Friday, February 11, 2011

Grade 6 Adventure Stories

The Missing Voice by Mikayla

One day my friend and I went for a walk. Then all of a sudden a door appeared in front of us.

"I wonder where it goes?" said Morgan.

"Maybe we should go through it."

We stepped through the door. First thing we noticed was we were under water. Then a shark was in the nearby distance. The shark said to follow him, so we did!

Right in front of us was a giant palace with sea horses, sharks, sea turtles and fish. Pearl, the Queen of the mermaids, gave us a scroll.
It said, "Please help me! I lost my voice and I can't find it."
So we told the Queen we would help her find it.
So we set out on our journey. We were swimming for hours, then we saw a bright light and heard someone signing. We saw a giant octopus. She had Queen Pearl's voice. Morgan tried to grab it. What a surprise she got it! We swam as fast as we could. Queen Pearl thanked us for finding her voice and she granted us a wish and we were home. The End




Farkles by Sydney



One day My sister, Scribble and I were walking in a tropical forest when we heard a loud roar behind us. We turned around and saw a pink sparkly dinosaur!

"Run!" yelled Scribble.

Scribble and I started running really fast, but the dinosaurs legs were longer than ours and it caught up to us easily.

"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" we yelled.
"Shut it, please" yelled the dino.

Then we got quiet. We heard the big roar, but it was coming from the dino's tummy.

"Sorry," said the dinosaur, "I'm very hungry. Do you happen to have something to eat?"

"Nope," said my sister, "We didn't know that we would meet a hungry dino." "Who are you guys, anyway?"

"I'm Doodle," I said.

I'm Scribble." said my sister.

"Cool!" said the dino." "I'm Jube-Jube. Pleased to meet you!"

In the following days Jube-Jube, Scribble, and Doodle became good friends.
The End




The Cookie Saviour by Jada

One day my friend Julia and I went on a walk. We decided to go in the forest. We didn't really know where we were going because we hadn't been there before but we didn't have bread crumbs. We just kept walking. We went pretty far and we were both tired and hungry.

"Julia, do you know the way home?" I said.
"How am I supposed to know?" complained Julia.
"Of course," I said, "All you have been doing is facebooking the whole time!"

"It's not my fault. I'm trying to update my Farm on Farmville!!"
"Whatever!" I said "Let's just try to find our way back home."

"I think we're going the wrong way."said Julia.

"Well , sorry. I didn't bring a map, but there wouldn't be a way of..."

I cut her off. "I know Julia".

It had been hours and we were both tired and hungry.

"Julia...Julia? Julia wake up", I said.

"Huh cookies." said Julia.

"What?" I said.

"I smell cookies!"said Julia.

"Ow!" I screamed, "You bit me!"

"Sorry", said Julia.

"Hey, I see somebody. OVER HERE!!!" we both screamed "It's Taya and Maria!"

"Are you guys lost too? Julia asked.

"Yep, we can't find our way out," said Taya.

"I smell cookies!"said Maria

"I told you," said Julia.

"Follow the scent", said Taya.

"I can see the light," I said.

"Grandma!" Julia and I screamed

"A way out, we found a way out by cookies," said Maria.

"Yum..."said Julia.

"Hi Grandma, we're all starving. Can we have a cookie?" I said.
" Of course but what happened?" said Grandma .

It's a long story" we all said.

And we all fell asleep on our plates of cookies.

THE END



Forest Adventure by Taya

One day Sydney and Jada were walking in the forest and they started to hear noises. They met Julia and Maria. Then it started getting dark as the four friends walked.


Then Jada heard some freaky noises and then she asked Sydney, "Did you just hear that?"

Jada looked around and then Sydney said, "Yes I did!"

The four girls kept on walking through the forest. Maria stopped walking and turned around. Julia said, 'RUN!"

All four of the girls screamed and ran.

Sydney said, "OKAY, I think we can stop running now!"

"But I'm still scared!" Sydney and Jada were very scared!

Then Jada screamed, "Maria!"

Then Maria says, "WHAT??"

Jada said, "CELLPHONE! Where is your cellphone? Call for help!!!!...You do have your phone don't you????"

"Yes..ohh yeah. Who do you want me to call?"

"I don't know call anyone who would know what to do or how to help us!"says Sydney.

Maria says "Okay, well ummmm. How about Erin? She might know."

They are calling Erin. Erin picks up the phone. She says sleepily, "Hello, who is this?"

"It's Maria, Sydney, Jada and Julia", they all say.

Erin says "Okay, well where are you in the forest?"

Jada says, "I don't know!"

Sydney says, "Near a hole!"

"Okay I'm coming!" Erin says.

They hear footsteps.

"Hey! I told you I would be hear soon!"says a familiar voice.

"Thank-you Erin. You came super fast!"

Then Erin saved them. "You know you should have put out bread crumbs!"

"Whatever Erin!" says Sydney.

Then they all walked out of the forest. The End




The Monster Tummy by Erin

Once upon a time Popcorn, the butterfly was flying with her friends in a rain forest. They loved to play tag.
One day they were playing tag and they saw a dinosaur. "We better stay away from that Dino,"said Popcorn.
"Well I don't care," said Jada, "Come over HERE YOU FAT DINO!"
The dino saw and heard Jada and came over and snapped her up in his jaws and as a dessert he snapped up Tub too.
The rest of the butterflies flew away and hid in a hollow log.

"We have to get Tub and Jada back", said Marty.

"Yeah, we should" said Taya.

"So we should feed him something nasty," said Buttercup.


"Good idea", said Popcorn.

So they all went and picked a green mushroom. We took it to the dino and said, "We brought you a green butterfly!"

The dino ate the mushroom. He started to say "this butterfly is nasty, what is...."But he never finished because he started to puke up butterfies. Finally we saw Jada and Tub come out. "Woah, that was nasty." they both said and they rushed off to the river to wash off all the dino puke.
"Well that teaches you not to call a dino fat,"said Popcorn, as they rushed off to find Tub and Jada.




Will you be my friend? by Kyle

Once upon a time there was a twelve year old boy named Mr. K. He's been looking for friends for his whole life. This story started with a walk in the park, and like always Mr. K was looking for a friend.

Then he saw someone leaning on a tree. Mr. K decided to ask him if he wanted to be friends. But right before he was going to ask him, he knew that person.

THAT WAS THE COOLEST PERSON IN HIS SCHOOL! It was Russell.

Mr. K started to shake. It looked like he had guts in his pants. Russell had no interest in being his friend.







Walk in the Woods by Dominic

One day my friends and I went on a walk in the woods. It started getting dark so we headed home.

"It feels like someone is following us", whispered Liam.

"It is just the wind" I replied.

As we walked home Liam and Russell noticed that someone was walking toward us pretty fast! A couple of seconds later he started chasing us.

"Run", I yelled.

We hid for awhile after ditching the man and we left Liam running away from him. When we got home we told our parents and we went looking for Liam.

"Whoops!"I said in my head. After three hours we heard his voice.

"No,no, let me go!"

Liam was in a hut deep in the woods trapped by the hobo.

"Call the cops!"said Mom

No, we shouldn't. He'd probably run away,"I said. to myself and after constantly filing the rope with my Mom's nail file, Liam was free and we ran home!




Spots and Dippie by Zoey

One day Jada, Maria, Sydney and I went to the pink sparkly caves in Africa. We walked into the cave. When we walked in a cheetah jumped out.

"Halt, who goes there? said Sydney.

"My name is Spots," said the cheetah.

Then all of a sudden the cheetah fell through the floor of the cave.

We all looked through the hole and we yelled "SPOTS!".

"MEOW!"yells Spots.

"Oh no, Spots fell down the hole", said Jada.

"Are you okay?" I said.

"Yes," said Spots.

Spots was okay. The girls all jumped down the hole to save Spots.

When they got down there, they saw the most amazing thing ever...

"DINOSAUR! we all yelled.

"AHHHHH HUMANS" yelled the dinosaur.

They ran away. Then Spots ran after the dinosaur and told her to stop.

"What's your name?" said Spots.

"My name is Dippie", said the dinosaur.

"Well, its nice to meet you" said Spots as we caught up to them.

"Hi, Spots, it's good that you made a new friend, but we need to get you out of here," said Sydney.
"I know", said Dippie, "Climb on my back!"

"Okay", we all said.

"Finally home", I said. The End

Park Adventure by Russell

One day my friends and I went on a walk in the park. We saw these guys that were drunk. Kyle got really scared because they started walking towards us. So we ran away and we got lost.
We didn't know where we were. Kyle got so scared he wet himself. The guys that were drunk were catching up to us. So Kyle climbed a tree and waited until the guys walked by. Then we got out and ran the other way which scared me even more.
Then they said that I was drunk but I said no. I called the cops. They were on their way so I made a trap to catch the guys that were drunk because they looked like the robbers that had escaped from jail and were never seen again. I climbed a tree but they saw me, so they were waiting for me at the bottom of the tree. But the cops came and they hit the trap. It was to make them hit a bench and fall down and that's what happened. Then the cops came and took them away. I went home and told my parents what happened. They didn't believe me one bit. I wonder why. The End

10 comments:

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Anonymous said...

Ummm... Check the story "Forest Adventure" they aren't actually adventuring though also the dialogue "Hey! I told you I would be hear soon!" HEAR, HEAR, HEAR???? WTF??? WHAY???

Anonymous said...

WTF

Unknown said...

... What is this? Class 6, you are so bad with writing adventure stories... They are so short..

Unknown said...

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Unknown said...

i am in grade 6

Anonymous said...

I use it as my homework

Anonymous said...

dude why the hell would u say WHOOPS when u leave ur friend, like WHY??

Anonymous said...

dude wtf is this???